Editing and the Chicago Manual of Style

I recently finished line editing a novel for a writer friend of mine. It was so exciting to work on her story in a professional capacity. And it gave me a reason to do something that was long overdue: buy the latest Chicago Manual of Style.

I almost said “splurge.” It’s an expensive book–$65 new. But it’s very important for book authors and editors. Style guides help us be consistent with how we use language, and the Chicago guide is the publishing industry standard.

I’m from the other side of the tracks, though. The AP Style side. That’s the standard in newspapers, and it’s governed by the Associated Press. Although both guides focus on clarity and consistency, AP encourages concision. After all, newspapers and magazines only have so much space. It saves a lot of characters to use numerals, as AP requests for 10 and up (and all ages), instead of spelling out the numbers, as Chicago encourages in most instances.

When I was managing editor of a weekly newspaper, there were a few things about AP Style that I didn’t like. Using “teen-ager” was one of them. That has since been updated to “teenager.” Which means I have to update my novel, BODY COPY. This is an in-the-moment train of thought from my protagonist, Megan, as she begins her first deadline at a new job:

“Gary turns his back on me even though I want to ask whether he’s going to do an intro piece on me, what time my pages go to press and how many articles he’d like me to have for the Schools page, and whether he wants us to go by the book on teen-dash-ager or if we can slip a little and do teenager, because that’s what Betsy allowed, since it’s part of 21st century lexicon and really shouldn’t be hyphenated, no matter what the Associated Press Style Guide has been saying for the last few decades. “

I love this 2009 column by Joe Grimm about some AP updates, including the teen change. I was also glad to hear that “backyard” is now always one word; before, depending on usage, it was sometimes “back yard,” and that was one of the rules I always had to check when copy editing on deadline.

Despite being new to Chicago, I’ve done so much newspaper editing that I knew the most important thing: what to look up. I’m still figuring out how the information is organized, as the guide is more than a thousand pages. One of the most surprising things is Chicago’s decision to encourage the Oxford comma, which I’ve been taught to avoid in school and through my newspaper work.

Now that I’ve learned some Chicago guidelines and will keep studying them, I’m considering overhauling this blog’s style, which is primarily AP–the most notable exception being my decision to run most book titles in all caps. I might even learn to love the Oxford comma.

In the next few months, I’ll occasionally post about these two style guides and rules that are particularly interesting. I’ve added another category over in my sidebar for these posts–In Style. Do you have any style or grammar questions? Please leave them in the comments and I’ll work on addressing them in future posts.

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The Joy of Sunshine

Maggie Madly Writing has passed the Sunshine Blog Award on to me.

Thanks, Maggie! I’m especially glad to receive this award because, here in the usually rainy Pacific Northwest, I’ll take any extra sunshine I can get!

Here are the rules:

  1. Include the award logo in the post.
  2. Link back and thank those that nominated me.
  3. Answer 10 random questions about myself and/or tell seven random facts.
  4. Nominate 10 other bloggers and link them to the award in their comments section.

I’ll answer the questions that Maggie used.

  1. What is your favorite color? Red.
  2. What is your favorite animal? Dogs, but I’m allergic.
  3. What is your favorite number? Nine. Which is written out as “nine” according to both the AP Stylebook and the Chicago Manual of Style. (Ten is where AP and Chicago begin to differ; 10 should be a number, according to AP, and written out, according to Chicago.)
  4. What is your favorite drink? Coffee from a local roaster. Decaf these days.
  5. Which do you prefer, Facebook or Twitter? Neither! I’m one of the rare folks who has never joined Facebook or Twitter.
  6. What is your passion? Writing fiction. Novels in particular.
  7. Do you prefer giving or receiving presents? Giving. That’s why I knit–because I love making things for other people. And I shop year-round for Christmas presents.
  8. What is your favorite pattern? Herringbone. In part because I like how it sounds.
  9. What is your favorite day of the week? Friday, because of the joy of anticipating the weekend.
  10. What is your favorite flower? Tulips.

I’ve been nominating a lot of bloggers recently, so I’m going to opt to pass this on to five instead, just as Maggie did.

  • Emma Meade offers reviews of paranormal fiction and movies. I don’t read or watch a lot of paranormal, but I always enjoy Emma’s posts. The way she critiques is really useful for any writer; she offers questions and concerns (and kudos) from a thoughtful, writing-centric point-of-view.
  • I’m thankful for Anthony Lee Collins over at U-town for his great posts and the sunshine he spreads to other blogs with his excellent, thought-provoking comments.
  • Debra Kristi has a passionate voice on her blog, Sparks in the Fire.
  • Valerie Lawson‘s posts always make me smile.
  • Ileandra Young runs the blog Writing: A Conversation Without Interruptions. (Now, after choosing her, I see she’s already won it once, but I’m leaving her here because her posts about writing and being pregnant radiate sunshine!)

You guys can either respond to those questions, which have apparently made the rounds in the blogosphere (look up Sunshine Award and you’ll see many people have used them), or answer these 10 of mine:

  1. What’s one of your favorite books from childhood?
  2. What are you reading right now?
  3. What’s a go-to meal you make on busy weeknights?
  4. Favorite thing to do in your free time?
  5. Favorite season?
  6. Favorite magazine?
  7. Favorite author?
  8. Favorite teacher (and why)?
  9. AP Style, Chicago Style, neither, or a mix of both?
  10. Do you prefer reading short stories or novels?

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Success Stories: Two New Releases

I always love sharing good news here. Two regular blog visitors released ebooks last week.

Dalya Moon launched SMART MOUTH WAITRESS on April 26. It’s the latest volume in her Life in Saltwater City series. You can read more about the book here.  Or order it from Amazon.

And Emerald Barnes released READ ME DEAD. Learn more about the launch and her experience working on the book. Or go here to buy it.

Congratulations to both of you!

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A Page of Body Copy–Literary/Women’s Fiction

After my post about being a product writer versus a process writer, several people suggested I dust my finished literary novel off and get it out in the world.

I spent seven years writing and revising BODY COPY, and it’s sitting dormant in a Word file on my computer. Naomi and Anthony pointed out that it’s important to put a finished manuscript out in the world. “Seven years of blood, sweat, and tears is too big an investment not to reap the reward,” Naomi said in her comment.

Too true.

I’m not prepared to delve back into my small-town newspaper novel immediately, but I’m certainly thinking about taking another pass at it with the idea of seeking publication. I’d probably first jump back into the agent search, but I’ve heard such horror stories lately that I’d also consider an ebook or indie publishing.

My reluctance to try an ebook has to do with the fact that genre books seem to be in more demand in that arena than literary fiction.

BODY COPY is definitely a blend of women’s and literary fiction. The plot is fairly commercial. My narrator is a 20-something woman starting over in a new town after her friend’s death. It’s about roommates and boyfriends and finding one’s voice. But the language is definitely literary. Maybe it would make more sense to court some small presses, although I’m sure they’re slammed with submissions, especially now that the bigger houses are buying so few manuscripts.

I’m sharing the first page of BODY COPY here today so I can ask this question: Are there ebook fans who would read this kind of literary/commercial hybrid? If you read literary fiction, do you ever read ebooks? I’d love any thoughts you may have.

Body Copy

By Laura Stanfill

Chapter 1

I cannot be your friend, so skip the smalltalk when you answer the door. Khakis with a plain shirt tell you nothing about me. That’s my uniform. When we shake hands in your living room, read my life line. Read how I wear no rings. I am not your mother or your sister or your friend and no, I don’t want to sleep with you. I am nobody you’re supposed to know.

What takes over between us, in the empty space, is your story. Today that’s all we have in common. My questions tug at the tail of your narrative. It’s your job to trace its ribcage and teeth. There’s enough ink in my bag to last for hours. Once we’re done, I close my notebook and say goodbye.

Your voice plays in my head as I dig in my bag for keys and wonder whether there’s time to stop for an iced coffee. My job is to print your life in black and white. Color if it’s a slow news week. The next time you hear from me will be my translation of who you are.

What you worry about most is whether that juicy grin floated up in you again, first documented at a family picnic in 1971 when you stole your little brother’s watermelon slice, your mouth pink with victory. Outside the frame your brother beats the grass, not knowing the word for thief. That’s your real smile. My camera grabbed the bone of it. You apologized. You weren’t ready. I took ten more shots to please you. But that first photo’s what my editor expects: gold.

On Wednesday morning, when you find yourself in the paper, verbs pumped and sloppy words dropped, strong light on your jaw, quite a nice picture actually, you’ll realize the whole town sat on your couch on a hot afternoon at the thirsty end of summer, wearing khakis and a plain shirt, saying no thanks to that tall glass of mint iced tea, because one sip would have broken the thread of your story and returned us, without question or apology, to the present.

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Tulips, Tulips Everywhere

Here in Oregon, spring means a pilgrimage to the Wooden Shoe Tulip Farm. Enjoy the photos! For those of you within driving distance to Woodburn, the festival continues through May 6.

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Twelve Writers All in a Row, Including Jean Auel!

I bought four books by Oregon writers at the Community Partners for Affordable Housing benefit--and had them all autographed!

I attended one of my favorite local writer events Friday night. HomeWord Bound is the annual fund-raiser for Community Partners for Affordable Housing.

Oregon authors attend as guests and featured speakers, giving attendees the chance to chat with them, buy books, and get personalized autographs.

This year’s speakers were esteemed Gov. Barbara Roberts, who wrote UP THE CAPITOL STEPS: A WOMAN’S MARCH TO THE GOVERNORSHIP,  and the amazing Jean Auel, whose latest work is THE LAND OF PAINTED CAVES.

The other authors in attendance were Scott Poole, April Henry, Jon Bell, Emily Chenoweth, Kim Cooper Findling, Loren Christensen and Lisa Place, Ted Coonfield, Bart King, Scott Sparling, and Alexis Smith. I had the pleasure of chatting with several of them before the evening’s speeches began, as they sat at a long table with piles of their books and multiple pens for signing. During the dinner itself, it was especially wonderful to visit with Emily Chenoweth, whose novel HELLO GOODBYE is now next on my reading list.

What could be more inspirational than seeing local authors assembled with stacks of their published books? Of course it’s also for a great cause: affordable housing.

Before reading several selections from her memoir, Barbara Roberts talked about being one of the first ten female governors in America. When she started working on her book, only one of them had written a memoir. She spoke eloquently about preserving that important history from a first-person perspective, rather than letting the story go untold.

In her speech, Jean Auel, now 76, discussed how she began writing the Earth’s Children series. “I was in my forties when I started writing,” she said. “I didn’t know what I wanted to be until I was forty.”

Auel didn’t intend to write novels, let alone a series, she said. “In late January 1977, an idea buzzed around in my brain.” She went on to explain the basic premise of THE CLAN OF THE CAVE BEAR. “I began to wonder if I could write a short story like that.” She answered herself: “No!”

The audience laughed and applauded, as of course that idea for a short story turned into a renowned six-book series. Then she addressed the kind of research she did, citing the fact that someone focusing on contemporary times can write about a character who gets in a car and drives to lunch, but that’s not true with writing historical fiction. Where would a caveman go for lunch, she posited.

While the dictum “write what you know” is often cited, Auel suggested instead, “Know what you want to write about.” And with that thoughtful remark, she shared an overview of her research process.

She began her exploration of early man using the Encyclopedia Britannica, where she learned about Cro-Magnon and Neanderthals. Then she went to the library. ”One book led to another,” Auel said. “I came home with a couple armloads, 45 books or so.” Her discoveries included information about wooly mammoths and the first art–”a perfect setting for new, fresh, exciting fiction.”

After that, Auel enrolled in classes to learn about the prehistoric experience, including how to make stone tools and a session on arctic survival where she spent a night in a snow cave. She recalled telling her husband, “We’re going to spend the night on Mt. Hood, dear.” He replied, “Oh you are, are you?”

Auel’s insight into her creative process was fascinating, and I am so grateful for Community Partners for Affordable Housing, not only for its essential and invaluable  service to our community, but for bringing local writing talent together for one inspirational night each year. For those of you who live in Oregon, put HomeWord Bound on your calendar for next April. The fund-raiser is a great way to meet local authors and to hear their ruminations on the craft while supporting CPAH’s great work.

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Blog on Fire Award

Naomi Baltuck has awarded me the Blog on Fire Award. Thanks, Naomi! She’s the author (with her sister) of KEEPER OF THE CRYSTAL SPRING, which I just bought and am excited to read, and she has a wonderful writing blog.

I’m supposed to thank the nominator (thanks again, Naomi!), list seven facts about myself and pass the award on to seven recipients. Here are my facts:

  1. I love local newspapers. Not daily ones, but the weeklies and monthlies that report on their communities.
  2. I’ve been a reporter, a county reporter, an editor and a managing editor for various local papers in New York, Virginia and Oregon.
  3. Speaking of awards, the most interesting honor I won for my reporting was the Consumer Issues Reporting Award for a series on contractor fraud.
  4. Much of my last novel, BODY COPY, takes place in a small-town newsroom.
  5. So many people think they know what journalism is like, based on how TV reporters or daily newspapers are portrayed in in the media. One of the reasons I wrote that particular book was to let people know what it was like working for a low-budget, small-town newspaper.
  6. With kids who don’t sleep that well, I’m often awake at 4 a.m. when the daily newspaper, The Oregonian, hits the front step.
  7. I don’t always have time to read The Oregonian, but I do read the local monthly when it arrives in the mail. I used to copy edit each issue back when I was editor of another monthly paper in the same newspaper chain.

Here are the folks I’m giving the award to, although I’m cheating and only doing five.

  • Novel Girl offers excellent author interviews, writing advice and book reviews.
  • Sara Flower is a wonderful writing blogger, and I’m excited to have found her.
  • I have given an award to Emma Burcart before, but this one suits her. Her women’s lifestyle blog has grown like wildfire, and she always has something funny, intuitive and uplifting to share.
  • I always enjoy posts by Leila Gaskin at Write Am I.
  • Ms. Marshmallow is the “bad girl of self-publishing,” and her drawings are as entertaining as her posts about writing.

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